Wednesday 11 January 2012

OS - Anokhi Prem Kahani - Part 1




This is the story of 2 strangers who met and One night changed everything between them...

Yeh ek Anokhi si Prem Kahani hai'' 

Geet was standing near the balcony and waiting for Maan to come……  She called up Maan………

Geet: Maan where are you???? I have been waiting for you so long???

Maan: I am stuck in a meeting you have food and sleep……..

Geet: No am waiting for you…….. You better come fast understood…..

Maan: Geet……..Listen

Geet: No am not going to listen at all……..

Maan: Geet in this condition you need to have food at right time……

Geet: So Mr. Maan Singh Khurana you need to understand that………

Maan: So Mrs Khurana is not going to listen……… Tum bohot ziddi ho gayi ho…..

Geet: Aap hi se sikha hai…….. ab mai phone rakhti hu aap jaldi aye……

Maan: aap ka hokum seer aakho pe madam……. I will come fast..... By the way what is baby doing..........

Geet: Baby is waiting for you…….. and puts the phone on her stomach….

Geet: See baby is also missing you……

Maan: Ya my little girl is  missing me…….

Geet: No it’s a boy……

Maan: No Geet it’s a girl……..

Geet: No boy……..

Maan: I will come home and discuss ok……

Geet: Come fast Maan. I am waiting for you….. I and baby miss you and love you……..

Maan: I love you too Geet and my little who is going to come……..

Geet keeps the phone and she starts talking to the baby keeping her hand on the stomach   `

Geet: Pata hai beta aap ke papa ki aur mummy ki Anokhi prem kahani hai…….. I will tell you the story today………


Flash Back

Geet and her friends had gone in a disc…….. They were enjoying at the fullest………. They were dancing and having fun…… It was Geet’s friends Anaya's birthday and also was her engagement party  that’s the reason she had decided to give a grand party in the disc. Anaya was engaged to Abhinav.

The disc was exclusively booked for friends circle of Anaya and Abhinav…. No outsiders were allowed in it………

Geet and her friends were dancing…… While dancing she bangs with someone……..  That some one was none other then Maan…….. They both just get lost in each other…… Maan is stunned at the beauty of Geet….. and Geet is just looking at his body and the expressive eyes Maan had…..

Geet (self thought): Wow what a handsome guy……

Maan (self thought) what a flawless beauty…….

They start dancing together……..

Geet gets tired and sits in one corner but her eyes are still on that handsome guy who is also looking at her…..

Maan goes near her and sits besides her……..

Maan: Hiiiii

Geet: Hiiiiii

By that time Geet’s friends come to call her that they are planning to go to beach…….. But Geet refuses and says she is very tired and plans to go home………

Geet: Bye

Maan: Leaving so soon……..

Geet: Ya have go home its already to late……

Maan: ok but what is your name……..

Geet: abhi to mile hai itni bhi kya jaldi hai……..

Maan: theek hai wapis milne ke liye apna phone no aur pata to batati jao…..

Geet: That’s not needed….. and leaves saying byeeee……

Maan: Hey listen…… At least tell me your name……..

Abhinav: Hey Maan with whom were you talking????

Maan: No one yaar…… By the way tell me who is that girl who is going???

Abhinav: Which girl???

Maan: See that girl…. Who is talking to Anaya…..

Abhinav: Oh that she is Anaya’s best friend……..

Maan:Ohhh so whats her name?????

Abhinav: Maan kya baat hai …… very much interested in her…… By the way her name is Geet…….. she is very sweet girl….. I have met her twice…

Maan: Ohhhh  Geet…….

Maan: Chal Abhinav…….. I am taking your leave now…… Its already too late………

Abhinav: hey  its not that late yaar……

Maan: No yaar I have a meeting tomorrow……..

Abhinav: Ok byeeeee…….. If you want I will give you the details of Geet….. (with a wink smile)
Maan: I will ask you if needed…… byeeeee


Maan reaches home and is lost in the world of Geet…….. He was thinking as to how some one can be so beautiful……

While he is thinking about Geet…… there was a knock on the door…..

Maan (self thought): who can be there at this time????

Maan opens the door and is shocked to see Geet standing in front of the door……  Even Geet is stunned to see the same handsome man in front of her…….. Maan just keeps on looking at her…… She was totally wet as it was raining outside……..

Geet: Excuse me………

Maan: No reaction………

Geet: Excuse me……

Maan: ya ya…..

Geet: actually I was in my car and I lost my way totally as I am new to this place…… and it started raining also and because of the rain by car has stop working…….. can I get help…….

Maan: ya sure why not…… come inside………

Geet( little scared): No I mean if I can find any mechanic nearby I will manage……

Maan: At this time you wont find any one……Now everything is possible in the morning only…… you come inside…… and you have become totally wet……… Don’t be scared……..

Geet very reluctantly goes inside……

Maan: Have a sit……. Be comfortable……..

Geet notices around the house and sees no one is there……

Geet: you stay alone

Maan: Ya………

Maan gives a towel to Geet to wipe herself…….. Geet takes it and looks at her clothes which had become totally wet…. She was shivering also…..

Maan notices that and tells: why don’t you change your clothes……..

Geet: I don’t carry extra pair with me………

Maan: I know that…….. here are the clothes take it and change it otherwise you will get cold……… (gives his kurta to her)

Geet: But how can I????

Maan: bimar padne se to acha hai na……….

Geet smiles: ya I will change it………

Maan shows her the way to room………

In the mean time Maan goes and prepares coffee…….. Geet changes and comes…….. Maan was just staring at her…… Geet was feeling awkward…..

Maan: Coffee….

Geet: thank you…..

They both start talking about each other………. About what they do and other stuff……… but Geet forgets to ask his name……. They become friends…. Infact they had started liking each other……..

After having coffee……..

Maan: Why don’t you go and sleep…… Its already to late……..

Geet: Ya thank you for all this help……..

Maan: My pleasure……… that I got an opportunity to help a beautiful girl like you……..

Geet gets shy…….. and just smiles and says Good night……..

Maan with smile: Good night…… If you need anything I am here……

Geet just nods her head………

Geet goes in her room and suddenly screams………

Maan gets worried and goes in the room……

Maan: kya hua…..

Geet: cockroach……

Maan: What???? Where is it………

Geet: it was there……..

Maan: It must have gone now…… relax……..

It was raining very heavily outside…… Because of the rain the light goes off……..

Geet gets more scared and hugs Maan very tightly………

Geet: Mujhe andhere is bohot dar lagta hai……

Maan: don’t worry I am near you……..

Geet: Don’t leave me……

Maan: I am not leaving you…… be calm……

They both were in each other arms……..

Geet hands gently touches his bear chest….. and Maan hands were moving to her back…… His hand slipped from her back to waist........ He was holding her tightly......... They could feel the hotness of each other…… They were stll in each others arm and Maan placed a gentle kiss on her shoulder....... Geet shivered.......... He holded more tightly........ 

Maan moves his hand on her face as if saying that not to worry……Maan places a kiss on her forehead...... Maan  touches his lips by his hand to remove the thread which was stuck…… The shiver occurs in her body….. she was about to move but because of darkness was very scared……..  Geet hand started moving his chest and also on his back…..

They were losing their control….. Maan gently kissed her forehead, then her cheeks…… Geet was reacting the same by moving her hand on him….. Thereafter Maan gently placed a kiss on her lips…… waiting for Geet’s reaction…… But Geet reacted in the same manner…… The gentle kiss turned into the passionate…….. While kissing each other their hands were moving on each other…….. their senses were reacting more and more…… While kissing they just fall on the bed…… and Maan first started kissing her neck, her jaw line…… Geet hand moved inside Maan’s vest…… that made Maan more active…….. Maan removed her clothes and same was done by Geet…….

They just started making love……… They were in each other for the whole night………

Next day

They got up in each other’s arms….. There was excitement, fear on their faces….. They didn’t know how to react about what had happened last night…..

Geet had tears in her eyes thinking about what has happened last night….

Maan noticed that: I mean I don’t know how to react about what has happen but I would like to say something to you……

Geet did not react to it……..

Maan: Would you marry me……..

Geet was stunned…..

Maan: Geet, I love you……… and am serious……

Geet: are you saying this because of yesterday……

Maan: No. I really love you…….. when I saw you in the party I just fall for you and not because of yesterday’s night…… I really need you………

Geet nodded her head saying yes

Maan: Then we will talk to our parents and fix everything…..

Geet: Yes……

Maan placed a soft kiss on her lips….. Geet shyingly accepted it……

Maan was happy to see her reaction……

Maan dropped Geet home and promised her to meet at place tomorrow…..

Maan and Geet both were exited and were thinking about the beautiful night they had……… They spoke on the phone for very long time……..

The day arose when they going to meet………

Geet reached the place on time and was waiting for Maan…….. She was still not aware of his name….. She had totally forgotten to ask him………

Almost 2 hrs passed away but Maan was no where……..

Geet got worried and started calling him…… but his no. was not reachable……… She was almost about to cry….. She decides to go to Maan’s house….. On reaching there she gets another shock of her life when she sees the house been locked……..

Geet reaches home and starts crying and talking to herself how could he do this to me'' How could''''.. He promised me to marry... What ever has happened that night both were equally responsible for it... But he promised me to that he will marry me... And he left without even telling me... How could he ever think of doing this...


Part II to continue